Prompt: describe Astrenada Gamsey.
My name is Astrenada Gamsey and I am nothing without you.
What was I before? I cannot remember ever feeling. I recall the things, embarrassing, disheartening, repulsive, but those experiences seem bare and lifeless. And so I wonder, did I feel, the day you sheltered me from the rain and those...people, did my gratitude effulge like it should have, from my trembling finger tips into your warm hands? Did my tears resonate inside my hollow shell, mimicking, terrorizing the pulsating ache in my brain, like it does now as I recall. Your voice is nothingness in my memories. I only see your lips moving, but the words that emerge are my own feminine but deep tones, attempting to cover up the flaw that is my mind.
I'm trying not to cry, hoping that the deeper I press my hands into my eyes, the less the chance the tears will come, and you will see, and you will judge. But you'd never looked at my face, catalyst to their taunts, only holding my hand and staring down, and it burns my inner skin, furry and pain crawling on the under-surface, cheeks reddening, because you can't even look me in the eye.
My name is Astrenada Gamsy and you... You have ruined me.
Prompt Success: Negative.
2 comments:
why is prompt success negative? I liked it a lot. Your description here is really goood.
haha because it felt like i was having the person i was supposed to describe describe another person is all... but in class they told me it worked through that to describe her so i guess it was a success :)
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